Very nice. I find it quite captivating as is... attention goes right to the eyes, where it belongs. Not sure I would change a thing. You really found some great light, and she's obviously a terrific subject and she trusts you with her picture. Nice job.
I like both images personally but I feel based on how you worded your question that you have a gut feeling about this
Suas habilidades básicas muito sólidas, ah, muito poderoso
Very nice work.Maybe Iwould have shot more closely.
keep up the good work.
Thank you very much for your invitation, it gives me pleasure.
Absolute belle image! Travaux Awesome!
The Aging Storm is one of the best portraits I show my pupils as an example of fine work, good taste an emotional impact.